Chữa đề thi IELTS Writing task 1 ngày 5-8-2023.
1. Đề bài:
The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countriesfrom five organisations from 2008 to 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
2. Phân tích đề
- Đề Dynamic nhìn thì tưởng dễ nhưng bar chart dynamic mà rất là kho xơi ở cách chọn số liệu. Vậy làm sao để chọn những số liệu hay cho một đường:
- Số liệu đầu tiên và cuối cùng nên là những số liệu được ưu tiên.
- Số liệu cao nhất và thấp nhất
- Vì bài này rất dài nên ta có thể sử dụng nhiều cấu trúc câu ghép và câu phức để viết câu cho ngắn gọn hơn nhé.
Ví dụ:
Starting at the highest/ lowest result of ..., A + V, followed by ...
While A dropped slightly but consistentlt to ..., B saw an increase to ... before further declining to ...
3. Bài mẫu tham khảo
The bar graph details the financial aid from five various organisations to emerging nations between 2008 and 2011. Overall, the sum monetary resources provided by Organisations 1 and 2 increased whereas Organisations 4 and 5 saw a downward trend and Organisation 3 remained stable despite some minor fluctuation..
Concerning the categories that rose, in 2008, the amount of funding donated by Organisation 2 was nearly double Organisation 1, at roughly $1.3 $billion, and about $0.6 billion, respectively. While Organisation 2 increased most significantly and consistently to the overall highest point of just over $2.5 billion in the end, Organisation 1 saw a slight rise to approximately $0.9 billion in 2009, followed by a drop of around $0.2 billion a year later and remained the same until the final year.
Moving to the other categories, the donations of Organisation 5 dropped constantly from roughly $1.2 billion to slightly under $0.5 billion between 2008 and 2011. Moreover, Organisation 4 contributed the least, at around $0.7 billion in 2008, dipping to about 0.3 billion in 2009 before falling further to nearly $0.2 billion in 2011. Finally, starting at the highest result of $1.5 billion at the beginning, the amount of Organisation 3 fluctuated at this level until the end, and was surpassed by Organisation 2.
