Chữa đề mẫu IELTS Writing task 1 - A small local museum in 1957 and 2007

 Đề bài: The diagram below shows a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007

Bài mẫu tham khảo:

The first map depicts the museum and its surroundings in 1957, while the second map shows the museum's changes over the course of 50 years. Overall, the maps demonstrate a reduction in green spaces and an expansion of the museum.

In 1957, the museum was surrounded by a plethora of trees, both in front, behind, and on the left of it. The museum could be accessed via a path leading to the entrance hall. The museum was comprised of a local history room, a museum storeroom, and a national history exhibition.

By 2007, the garden had been downsized to only one side of the museum, as a car park had been erected in front of it. The entrance was relocated to the left of the museum, directly behind the car park, leading to a museum shop. The storeroom and national history exhibition were no longer present, but the local history room had expanded and was situated at the museum's core. In front of it, a reception and a cafe were constructed, while an education center and special exhibits were established at the back.

In summary, the maps demonstrate a reduction in green spaces and the museum's expansion over time, with new facilities being introduced to enhance the museum's appeal and functionality.


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