Writing task 1: PIE - HAPPINESS

The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.




Bài mẫu tham khảo:

Based on the findings of a survey, the pie charts indicate factors that contributed to individuals' happiness. Participants in the study were divided into two age groups, those under thirty and those over thirty. Generally speaking, they both agreed that achieving career goals and engaging in their hobbies made them the most happy.

Regarding the first group, about one third of them felt most satisfied with their work accomplishments, while 22% enjoyed their hobbies the most. The importance of having an attractive appearance was cited by 18% of respondents, 3% higher than the proportion of those who placed a high priority on travel.

In the second category of participants, 32% attributed their happiness primarily to their success at work. Meanwhile, nearly one in five found contentment in hobbies or financial security. Furthermore, unlike the first group, those over thirty did not consider travel as a major factor in making them happy, but rather preferred to be with their families (14%).

Notably, respondents either under or over thirty mentioned miscellaneous other factors that influenced their happiness. However, their percentages were not substantial (only 14% and 10%, respectively).

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